EDITORIAL SERVICES

Submission Material Critiques
Query Letter Critique

Let me bring my experience in the query trenches to your query letter! I will review your query letter in depth, including proofreading, line edits, and margin comments/questions to help you think more deeply about the best way to position your project to capture an agent or editor’s attention.

Rate: $50. Turnaround time: 2 weeks.

Synopsis Critique

It can be tricky to distill your plot and main character arc down to standard synopsis length (1 single-spaced page), so let me help! Provide me with your draft synopsis of up to 1.5 single-spaced pages, and I will proofread, make line edits, and include insightful margin comments regarding the synopsis itself and also the outline of the manuscript more generally.

Rate: $65. Turnaround time: 2 weeks.

First 5 Pages Critique (Novel-length projects)

The traditional sample length attached to a query letter, the first five pages of your manuscript need to be able to hook your reader. I will review your first five pages in depth, including proofreading, line edits, and margin comments/questions to help you elevate your work so your readers can’t put it down. Whether you’re getting ready to query or want to get a feel for my editorial style before you commit to a longer edit, this is the service for you!

Rate: $75. Turnaround time: 2 weeks.

Submission Package Critique (Novel-length projects)

Includes critiques on your query letter, synopsis, and first five pages, with a $25 discount!

Rate: $165. Turnaround time: 3 weeks.

Picture Book Critiques
Picture Book Critique

Looking to take your idea from a favorite family bedtime story to the printed page, or refining a picture book manuscript after a lot of careful development? No matter your level of experience, I’ll review your picture book manuscript of up to 1200 words and give it the full developmental treatment: line edits, thought-provoking margin comments, and a thorough editorial letter chock-full of resources and ideas for revision. Because 32 pages can provide for a surprising amount of variation in a text, I charge a sliding scale for this service based on the number of hours required (rounded up to the nearest hour), starting at $50 for one hour up to a ceiling of $200. This service does not include a Zoom consultation.

Rate: $50/hour, $200 maximum. Turnaround time: 3 weeks.

Submission Package Critique (Picture Book projects)

Get a holistic review of your picture book submission by adding a query letter review to your picture book critique, and save $10 off the price of a standard query review!

Rate: $90-240 ($40 + $50/hour). Turnaround time: 3 weeks.

Novel-Length Manuscript Critiques
Manuscript Critique

Have you spent months (or years!) pouring your imagination, energy, and heart into your manuscript, but still aren’t sure that it’s ready for submission or publication? Or have you just completed your first draft and aren’t sure what to do next? Let me review your story and help you achieve your vision. I will read your manuscript in full and provide an editorial letter with commentary on plot, tension, characters, and more! In my letter, I will flesh out my feedback with craft pointers, and provide you with specific, actionable suggestions for revision. Please note that this service does not include any markup on the manuscript. This service includes one free 30-minute Zoom consultation.

Rate: $0.012 / word. Turnaround time: 6-8 weeks.

Developmental Editing

Have you spent months (or years!) pouring your imagination, energy, and heart into your manuscript, but sense that something still isn’t quite right? Are your beta readers or critique partners providing feedback that’s left you flummoxed? Do you think your writing might need a little help too? Let me take a deep dive into your story and help you figure it out. I will review your manuscript in full, providing in-line feedback and margin commentary, as well as a full editorial letter with detailed commentary and craft pointers on plot, tension, characters, and more! My feedback will provide you with specific, actionable suggestions to elevate your story. Please note that this service does not include a full line edit or proofreading. This service includes one free 30-minute Zoom consultation.

Rate: $0.055 / word. Turnaround time: 6-8 weeks.

Zoom Consultations
Zoom Consultations

Did my editorial feedback raise any questions or concerns you’d love to discuss? Do you want a little more help brainstorming solutions for bringing your story to its fullest potential? This service includes one 60-minute Zoom call to follow-up on my editorial feedback and help you find the best path forward for your story.

Rate: $75 for a 60-minute session.

THE FINE PRINT

I won’t consider editorial projects for agent representation. I abide by the Canon of Ethics of the American Association of Literary Agents, and any paid work I take on through my freelancing business to help authors via editing, manuscript critiques, or other consultations will not be considered by me for agency representation, even after our work together has concluded. An agent should never charge a client or potential client for reviewing their work. You are free, however, to query other agents at Corvisiero Literary Agency after our work together.

To find out more, you can review the whole Canon of Ethics yourself, or check out the relevant provisions below:

AALA Canon of Ethics Paragraph 8:

8. A) The Association believes that the practice of literary agents charging clients or potential clients for reading and evaluating literary works (including query letters, outlines, proposals, and partial or complete manuscripts) is subject to serious abuse that reflects adversely on our profession. Members should be primarily engaged in selling or supporting the selling of rights and services on behalf of their clients, i.e. members should not be primarily pursing freelance editorial work and misrepresenting themselves as literary agents or support staff of a literary agency. Members may not charge any reading fees for evaluating work for possible representation. However, members may provide editorial services in exchange for a fee to authors who are not clients, provided members adhere to the following provisions:

I) Members who render such services must make clear to the author in writing in advance that the rendering of such services does not indicate or imply that the member will represent the author as a literary agent and must provide to the author at the outset a copy of this Paragraph (8A-8B) of the AALA Canon of Ethics; and 

II) if during or after the rendering of such services the member agrees to represent the author, the member must then return in full all payments received for such services prior to submitting the work and waive any further payments for such services for that author; and 

III) to help prevent confusion, abuse, and to further separate paid editorial services from literary representation, at no time may members respond to an author who approaches them only for literary representation by instead suggesting or directing the author to pay for editorial services by the member or by anyone else financially associated with the member or member’s agency. Members must provide paid editorial services only to authors who have approached them directly for such services.

B) Literary representation of any author must not be contingent upon the author engaging any such paid editorial services, nor shall a member retroactively charge for editorial services in the event a client’s project is not sold. For avoidance of doubt, the intent of this clause is to allow members flexibility and independence in their payment structures while avoiding the conflict of interest that may arise from members making a profit on top of commission from the sale of both their client’s works and separate paid services rendered to that client. 

I can’t guarantee any particular measure of “success.” Solicitation or use of my services in no way guarantees you will secure a literary agent, a publication deal, or “bestseller” status on any platform. While I always aim to help you elevate your work to its highest form, and achieve your vision, the publishing industry is very subjective and there is no way for me to guarantee any particular indicator of success.